Script to Screen- The Big Pitch
My Pitch
Title: No Purple
Genre: Drama
25 Word Pitch: A child's world is a fun world, but it's not to be ignored. An ignorant mother soon learns this lesson.
Description: The relationship between a mum Tracy and her 9 year old daughter May is already breaking, but a trip to their local park compromises it even more. When Tracy cares more about her next fling than her daughter, May soon feels ignored. Tracy tells May to meet her at a park after school so May waits patiently on the bench for her mum. Tracy eventually arrives; showing no affection towards her daughter, who is excited about starting Big School soon. May begins to play around the park, while her mum won't even watch what she is doing. May is curious and wanders into the bush on the edge of the park. She runs out screaming that she has been touched. Tracy instantly looks up; this is the first moment of eye contact between the two characters- the first time their eyes meet. Tracy grabs hold of her and realises her mistake, and that she should have been listening to her daughter all along, while May finally gets the attention she wanted- but was May telling the truth?
Title: No Purple
Genre: Drama
25 Word Pitch: A child's world is a fun world, but it's not to be ignored. An ignorant mother soon learns this lesson.
Description: The relationship between a mum Tracy and her 9 year old daughter May is already breaking, but a trip to their local park compromises it even more. When Tracy cares more about her next fling than her daughter, May soon feels ignored. Tracy tells May to meet her at a park after school so May waits patiently on the bench for her mum. Tracy eventually arrives; showing no affection towards her daughter, who is excited about starting Big School soon. May begins to play around the park, while her mum won't even watch what she is doing. May is curious and wanders into the bush on the edge of the park. She runs out screaming that she has been touched. Tracy instantly looks up; this is the first moment of eye contact between the two characters- the first time their eyes meet. Tracy grabs hold of her and realises her mistake, and that she should have been listening to her daughter all along, while May finally gets the attention she wanted- but was May telling the truth?
This is 9 year old May. She is ambitious and excited for her future, but all she really wants is a good relationship with her mum Tracy. Tracy’s face is not seen until the last scene as she is always turned away from May
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