The Big Pitch- Feedback
On October 21st I pitched my idea to Steve, Simon and the rest of the first years. It was a great learning curve standing up in front of a group of people to present my idea, something that I found quite nerve-racking, however it is great experience for when working in the Television industry. I explained the main idea for my story and then Steve and Simon asked about sections that were a little unclear or that I had not explained fully. This helped me to work out which sections of my story I had not linked up, for example 'what is May doing in the park?' and 'Why is the mum distracted?' Steve and Simon asking questions helped me to clarify parts that I had not thought about which then enabled me to link the story up. Steve then went through his '5 Golden Rules' and I had to tell them how they fit with my idea. For example with the 5th Golden Rule- 'moments' I told him that my main moment is when Tracy (May's mum) looks at her for the first time. S...